Getting Even – #FRIDAYFICTIONEERS

Getting Even – #FRIDAYFICTIONEERS

Photo Credits: Fatima Fakier Deria

Johnny fingered the gun in his pocket as the bus moved. Ricky, driving the bus was to stage a breakdown in five minutes. The two of them planned to rob the passengers. In five minutes the bus stopped. Johnny pulled his gun and yelled ‘Stick em up.’. The passengers looked at him in panic. Johnny pocketed everyone’s wallet and other items. Suddenly Ricky signaled to someone and inspector Vicky stood up from the last seat and placed his gun on Johnny’s forehead. Johnny looked at Ricky surprised. Ricky said, ‘That was for betraying me year before last. Just getting even’.

Word Count: 100 words

Author’s Note: This piece has been written in response to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields Friday Fictioneers Page

One Thought to “Getting Even – #FRIDAYFICTIONEERS”

  1. Paybacks are hell! That was a nice twist to the story.

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